Sunday, April 4, 2010

""The Lassie Who Can Blush"

Hey guys! This is Rachel! I was in a mood to write a poem today, and this one fell together very quickly, so I thought I'd put it on here and see what you all thought of it! This poem is written from a wise young man's point of view! :)


"The Lassie Who Can Blush"
By Rachel H.
I would give many a dollar,
I would give a golden thrush,
If you showed me really, truly,
A young lass who still can blush.
There are many "happy" women
Who have laid their values bare,
Who parade in shameful clothing
That low men might think them fair.
But the kind of girl I notice,
Isn't one who's in a rush,
Not a girl who's bold and brassy,
But a lassie who can blush.
A blush is colored innocence,
The rose of modesty,
The proof of wholesome maidenhood
Through endless history.
And oft I smile to myself
As I catch a tell-tale flush,
"There's still a precious group of them-
Those lassies who can blush!"
I would give many a dollar,
I would give a golden thrush,
Just to see old-fashioned sweetness
Of a lass who still can blush.

7 comments:

  1. Oh I like that alot Rachel! Very good! Which reminds me I still haven't wrote your poem for you! I'm sorry! I hope your in no hurry? =]

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  2. Ah ha! That's so cute...IIIIIII like it!!!!!!! You're so good at writing poems!

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  3. Hi Rachel!
    Mom and I really enjoyed the poem! Thank you for your sweet letter, I hope to reply soon!
    Love,
    Morgan

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  4. Dear Rachel,
    I don't get to look at the blog posts very often but I got to this morning and I saw this poem. Loved it!
    -Alison Wilson

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  5. Aw! Thanks for all your sweet comments! I got your letter today Morgan! Ours crossed! :)

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  6. Oh, wow that was really good! I love that.

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  7. I love all your poetry, Rachel! You're such a good writer--they sound just like the poems I've read in many a book of poetry (especially because yours aren't free verse).
    By the way, I blush all the time. :) Too self-conscious.

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